A Sunrise
I've got one more writing assignment to share. It's just a short poem, and actually the assignment was to write a love poem, but I didn't figure that out until I got to school, and then I just added some to it. But this is the best part. Even if it is short.
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A Sunrise
Pastels of sky blend
with trails of light,
and for a moment,
the world is perfect.
Just a moment,
and then this magic fades,
clouds parting,
wisps of color fading.
For the blazing sun
climbs the heavens and
its brilliance replaces
the day’s first light.
...
A Sunrise
Pastels of sky blend
with trails of light,
and for a moment,
the world is perfect.
Just a moment,
and then this magic fades,
clouds parting,
wisps of color fading.
For the blazing sun
climbs the heavens and
its brilliance replaces
the day’s first light.
posted by Starry-Eyed at 1:02 PM
1 Comments:
Oooh! Nice imagery! Parts of it reminds me of when you wrote the phrase about the gray fading in gray in that rock climbing thing and no one got it and I shook my head in sorrow, since you had to take it out. It was a nice line. And this is a nice poem!
I still really want to know what you added for the love part.
I would have said something along the lines of how all this perfection was accentuated by the effect of the loved one at my side, or whatnot. Cheesiness at its top form.
-Maria
PS. It would have been even more tackier if you had made it rhyme. I think poems that rhyme are just naturally more tacky than those that don't. As a general rule. I have read a few good ones.
PPS. And I thought I wasn't going to add a PS on this one... Woe.
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